I wouold boost the resalution of the image to get some really tight detail and maybe a bit of shadow to the right of the left pouldron, other than that the pic is awesome it's got great atmosphere and the pose shows intention, sweet work as usual dude
If the Word Bearers are seeming to gain the upper hand on the Alpha Legion its because they want them to. Soon an overconfident push by the crazed and often over zealous Word Bearers will lead them right into the middle of an Alpha Legion ambush.
Yes, you are correct that the Word Bearers would walk into an ambush, but the odds would be strictly against the Alpha Legion. Reason: We use Cultists' to be our sacred shields, and then your bolters would prove insufficient, as well as pointless and wasting ammo.
Ahhh but you are forgetting that the Alpha Legion has a long history of using cultists as well. In fact it is entirely possible that some of those meat shields you cling to so dearly are actually our agents ready to betray you and your brothers at a moments notice.
You have talent in these arts. Nonetheless, you may rely on weakling peasants to do your work, to weed out the strong and to display your... Skill, at propaganda on the vox-channels, but there is one thing you dismay and disapprove of using. Daemons are our agents and our pets, and we shall use them to our full extent. Watch, as our warriors of blood, lust, decay and fate become your most worrying hassle. Watch them become blessed, become destructive, become the most pious beings in our Legion. And you care not of what happens to your 'cultists'? Pfft. You rely on them constantly, and you need them. Nonetheless, I will accept the fact that you may have backstabbing weaklings in your force, but to which over-throw a powerful faith? You, brother, are wronged.
Do not forget that powerful faiths have been over-thrown many times in the past 'Brother'. Before our great war began against the dogs of the Imperium we over through countless 'faithful followers' of chaos long before we knew what we were truly dealing with. This, will be no different.
Descent and treachery will flow through your battle lines and in the hearts of every warrior and cultist you think loyal. Your Deamonic pets will find themselves trapped between the sights of our bolters and the blades of thought allies at their backs.
They will return to the warp and drag your forces along with them.